Thursday, December 18, 2014

Opening for my Book (Sorrows of Tommrow)

(Edited by: Tokki Penn) yep this is the opening for my book :3 enjoy! I'm still working on chapter 1^^!!!
YEAR 98756 C.E
THE EARTH BECAME GELID WITH MOST PLACES TOO HARSH TO INHABIT.
MOUNTAINS FORMED INTO ICE AND ABRADED INTO TREACHEROUS PEAKS CAUSED BY BLUSTERING WINDS.
ALTHOUGH PERILOUS, HUMANS FOUND REFUGE WITHIN THESE STRUCTURES BY EXCAVATING CIRCULAR HABITABLE ZONES, ESTABLISHING MAZE-LIKE CITIES.
THESE PLACES ARE PROTECTED FROM THE HARSH WINDS AND CHILLING COLD . . .
. . . BUT THEY ARE NOTHING MORE THAN A DESERT WASTELAND SURROUNDED BY ICE, ARID AND DRY.
THE GOVERNMENT TOOK OVER WHAT WAS LEFT OF THE HUMAN RACE, MONITORING CITIZENS UNDER AUSTERE CONTROL.
SENTINELS WERE CREATED AND USED FOR SOMETHING MORE “USEFUL”. THE ORGANIZATION CHOOSES WHO WILL BE THE ‘ORDINARIES’ AND WHO WILL BE A SENTINEL.
THESE SENTINELS ARE USED TO KEEP ORDER WITHIN THE CITIES AND WILL USE FORCE WITHOUT HESITATION.
BECOMING CORRUPT AND SAVAGE BECAUSE OF THE ‘ORGANIZATION’, THE SENTINELS STRUCK FEAR INTO THE CITIZENS AS THE YEARS PASSED.
HALF OF THIS FORCE IS MADE UP OF MACHINE APPARTUS - YOUNG CHILDREN, USUALLY EIGHT YEARS OF AGE - TAKEN AWAY FROM THEIR FAMILIES TO SERVE THE ‘ORGANIZATION’.
THE ‘ORGANIZATION’ IS THE GOVERNMENT: THEY RULE BY FEAR AND POWER, AND THE EARTH HAS FALLEN VICTIM TO THEIR CORRUPTION.




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